Good pace, but why Dubstep?

I thought it was going well, until the trademark sounds of Dubstep came in, to be brutally honest. This is a nice sounding piece, with a nice, if slightly basic beat, coupled with a serviceable melody - nothing spectacularly good, but then again, nothing spectacularly bad, either.

The sound distorted parts changed all of that, as it took away some of the magic of the track for me. The intro came in, almost in the same way that When the Wild Wind Blows, by Iron Maiden does, with a breeze blowing in a calm, almost carefree manner. With this, you kept recycling this simple sound, which is nice and natural - the artificial stuff needs some work, to tidy their sounds up, make them more crisp and better work out where they belong in the tune.

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Critism

Too long intro; you could halve it. I liked the way the synth led to the drop but the drop itself was too soft. Use more... hard synth, heavy. Different rythms. Let it dominate. It was just a melody, and I didn't even like that melody. You should try to use other tones than only those you're using.

That's all; now I must sleep to live.
Other than that, I liked it. Maybe you shouldn't listen to all my critism; cause I actually liked it :P