Interesting

This wasn't what I expected to hear when I read "Ambient" in the genre. But it's a good thing that you are trying something new here.

I'm not entirely sure if I like this piece or not, but it definitely is interesting to listen to. The sharp syntheziser noises can get annoying after a while, so you should be careful with using them if you progress this song any further. I think they work quite well for the intro, however.

I like what you've done with the outro for this short piece. You could use that in the real song as well. Either as an outro or maybe as a cross over to another part of the song.

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Interesting

Interesting, a synth with a VERY sharp attack, and a VERY long decay. Not sure whether i like that or not, it made me feel kind of anxious/uncomfortable. The staccato attack had me on edge, i couldn't fall back into the piece, as it wasn't predictable. It didn't warn me about sharp sounds, they just arrived. I'm not really saying whether that's a good or bad thing, i guess it depends on what you were going for. The bass line that enters is softer on the ear, but the two sounds don't really combine. They are like separate entities rather than two pieces of a system. The song structure is fine, it just builds and then fades, and i can enjoy that. Certainly an interesting piece, i'm just not sure what you trying to do.