Marshall, Sounds like an SOS.
Holy whack unlyrical lyrics andre!
To the rap mobile.
lol made me think of that.
Author Comments
This is a beat made by Rama (Team-Dix).. With his permission, Here it is.. I hope you all like it. Thanks for listening.. I uploaded it into the Olskool Cat. because thats where I found the beat, However..It prolly could go in Modern as well.
Francis-Po responds:
haha def could of went that route.. funny :)
So fresh Love it.
Francis-Po responds:
Thanks my dude! Really appreciate that and it gives me chills knowing people really feel it. That aspect means alot to me.. Mostly means everything to me actually
You did well on this song Francis. You've got a damn good quality mic. Great job mixing, and your flow was fair dope.
My only problem I have with this song is that there was no real focal point in the lyrics. What is the meaning behind your lyrics, what are you trying to say in this song? It seems to me that it was a bit all over the place. You had a little bit of this and a little bit of that.
Lyrics will always be the strong point in any song. You're a good rapper Francis, so I want to see you put more story into your lyrics, make them have one topic you're talking about. That's when you'll become a great rapper.
Will be looking out for more of your stuff. Props.
Francis-Po responds:
Yes I can agree with you, I do pride myself in writing a full story.. Im a philosophical artist I sometimes talk in tongue, Hence the lyrics in this song, "Its like the Morris code everytime I explode".. Everything I say does have meaning tho. Some are easy to see what im saying and some are incredible hard. The lyrics that is.. But thanks a bunch man, i appreciate it, I couldnt do it without my producer tho, Me and Him together are a good team. Anything in the future I will send you a pm... Love the constructive criticism tho, I only want to get better
Heeeyyy !!! Is it what i mean?) Awesome man. 1000000+ rated
Choose next beat...
Francis-Po responds:
Awesome man, Glad you liked it, When I come across something of yours I am really feeling ill be sure to let you know.. All your beats are amazing.. It all just depends on what kind of emotion I got in me at the time :)..
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 2,155
- Faves:
- 6
- Downloads
- 81
- Votes
- 5
- Score
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4.89 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Feb 9, 2012
- 8:49 PM EST
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Olskool
- File Info
- Song
- 7.5 MB
- 3 min 18 sec
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