This needs to be a progressive track - u essentially began the beginning like a pad break like an intro which of course, i guess is creative style. However, from the perspective of most professional DJ's ( excluding myself) including TYAS or maybe even ALEX M.O.R.P.H., u really want to start the piece off by a string of kicks ( with power ). Also with transitions - I hear so many people using "dead" pauses as transitions - do not use those. Instead use a nice sweep. in place of a reverbkick - which I think u used. And finally for the ending make it strong - essentially break down the song by layers - if u understand.

Thats pretty much it.

THose High synths have nicely written chords but...

They ruin the thing for me.
It gives you the feeling as if they were trying to steal the music.

not bad bro not bad ^_-