This is a 1:30 demo of something im working on. I would really like some feedback on the beat and stuff. Currently its an intro, verse, and chorus. I recorded some lyrics as a place holder for now. Here they are:

So Im at the Club
Poppin bottles like super soakers
And Im at the bar
Bitch actin like I should know her
I said hoe you a 3 on any given day
she said you can take me home anyway
So Im walkin on
lookin for another piece
Im tryna find that brunette with some double D's
While Im lookin around
Everything was fine
Then I spot this cutie
oooh shes gotta be mine!

Plz hit me with some feedback!
I actually wanna finish this one :D

thanks

-TheERA