Really great sounding piece bro, but it just didn't seem to have a sort of catchy melody synth. I do like the track though, don't get me wrong. Sounds pretty good, but I'd work on the drums, they seem to need some volume, and the main melody synth could use some work. Maybe you could even add another melody synth to the beat to mix things up. Good job bro, keep up the good work. :3
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Hey guys, hope you like this track, one note IT'S NOT DONE! I have a vocal line for it, but I suck at singing... if you know anyone who can sing let me know! It would be awesome to complete this track! Please comment with constructive criticism, so I can get better!
Kassich responds:
thanks for listening! The reason theres not really a melody, is because i already wrote it, but i left it out because i want to save it for a vocal lead. Hopefully i find someone who wants to sing over it at some point in time, because the track sounds pretty empty without it. As, for the drums... they need a lot of work :) thanks for the review!
Try listening to Ocean Lab. I really think the intro melody is a bit long. Also do u think u could add a stronger synth bass? Possibly make a stronger pad also - u know incorporate it with the light-hearted melody? But other than that, and the
weak kick - which should be easily increased in Decibel strength. really neat piece.
Kassich responds:
thanks for the review man, mastering and figuring out what a track needs once the basic idea is flushed out is my weakness, thanks for helping, ill be sure to incorporate your comments into the final mix!
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