I do like this song, but you can't really get people to fall in love with it. The only problem with it is that it is a bit monotone in terms of dynamics, you did have some in there but there wasn't a lot of contrast between each part though. quick fix for dynamics would be to lave a few lower lows, and a few higher highs, and a more definite climax. Then there is the generic needs for wub wub in terms of your base needing to go up a bit and WAAAAAH- WAAAAAAH. pretty good though you put time into the rifts and that showed.