1: you probobly should have called it: thismightfail
2: You may not have the best samples considering you are using musescore but keep it up and get that
musical adrenaline going and once you get going dont stop
3:dont put it on loop unless it is a loop
4: kevin when i read you saying things on the internet i imagine it in a diffrent voice than yours!?!

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Great job on the notes! The sounds weren't great but it was very well played. Good lob!

This might not be a masterpiece but it's certainly not bad! The instruments aren't the highest quality (and that, in my opinion, isn't a huge deal) but the arrangement is certainly very melodic, and it has a very 'optimistic' feel to it. Overall, I'd say it's a well made piece, just lacking the 'polish' of some of the very professional tracks on NG.
I realise this was submitted a few months ago, but if you're still interested in music composition I say keep it up- I can hear a lot of potential in your music!