I like

It's a simple tonal pattern through most of it. But it's catchy, which is what I assume you were going for.

Your drums tend to be a little harsh, overall. I've noticed this in other songs as well, they need a little reverb and some softening. That, and to switch up the pattern they play sometimes. this three tap Snare-Snare-Kick gets old quickly, and could do with some freshening.