Something differant here
Hmm so this was notbad i like the odd and strange sound syou have mixed in this tune lots of goodmixes, i could see this being used in some battle stick flash or sci-fi flash entry, you have agood mixture of differant sounds and such, it really keeps you wondering whats going to be next, i think you have something good here, as for improvment i dont know i think i like it the way it is.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mess with it too much, maybe add some sort of "ECHO" effect in the backround but otherwise its pretty good.