I really liked this track. The vocals were placed really well and even catchy enough to get stuck in my head. What really did it for me was the 2 different voices. Together they really made the song come to life. Just the deep or the just the main vocalist wouldn't of worked as well for this. What really caught my attention was 1:55 where the deeper voice asked what they were talking about in the pause in the music. It just...felt so right.
I'm normally not a big fan of lyrics in electronic music because they tend to overpower the music instead of working with it. Here seems to be an exception, so congrats on really knowing how to make both work together!
While there is always room for improvement I have 2 main critiques.
1. I can't tell what the main singer is saying with the exception of the "catch me on the flipside". I had to refer to your description to find out what he was singing. This being your intention or not, it annoyed me a bit. I like to know what is being said if you add them because it can add a whole different "meaning" or "feeling" to the song.
2. While I said earlier that I liked the two voices, they seem to to add two different feels to the song. I'm not sure if this is supposed to be darker, or a more lighthearted finger tapping tune. This made for me a feeling truly unique to this song. I'm just not sure if this was intentional or not.
If nothing else, this song made me really want to check out the rest of your work, and that's a good thing.
I wish you the best on your music crafting journey.
Cheers