The main melody is a little too "electronicy?" Work with that and work out some kinks overall and it could be pretty good.
A remix of Dark Hysteria adding more dubstep and more instruments
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The main melody is a little too "electronicy?" Work with that and work out some kinks overall and it could be pretty good.
It has an acceptable drop and the start sounded a little dirty even. But the body of the song kills it. You can do better though, because the bit at 1:55 should have come in at 1:07 instead. It's better to have a hell short song than to kill it. That's one of my rules of thumb anyway.
Thank you for your suggestions ill try to apply those to my next track!
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