The first thing I noticed was the awkward pan change in the beginning line,it is original in all sense of the word,but I just didn't like the constant change. That wah wah wah bass is pretty sweet though. One thing I'd like to say is that not changing the main synth makes things something to sleep to,but it's alright,since you're starting out. I do admire that you picked a simple major progression to keep throughout the song,since you are just starting out as a musician of this caliber. You're alright for just starting out,If you improve a bit more who knows what you could be :P
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