the piece start strong, but quickly drop in intensity and quality. I don't know if this was meant. Then at 1;30 i thought the song ended and i was kinda confused. same happened at 2;00. Maybe it's just me who's not used to this kind of music. I know you're not trying to please everyone and that's perfectly fine.

Then, the song gave me the impression of "falling through time". I kind off blacked out and realsied 4 whole minute had gone by as i was listening. Then the loop started over. You missed a small opening at the end of the music so the loop doesn't match right. And that pretty much killed the sensation i had going. It's not a big deal, but for me, it is. Because for some reason i became hypnotised, then, it's like the music wanted to mock me and slapped me in the face. Truly, it was weird.

All in all, except two or three minor details, i pretty much liked it!

Keep working hard! Stop making excuses and follow whatever dream you have! Don't miss your chance buddy!

You got yourself a new fan here =)