Nice and atmospheric!

I am not very familiar with Breaks/Breakbeat, but do know something great when I hear it. By the way, did you get that PM I sent you?

Instrumentation: True to the genre, you did a great job on the percussion and the bassline. With that being said, they almost drowned out the melodies in this.
Composition: This may not be as fast and intense as Ricochet Love and Rocket Race by Waterflame, but it didn't need to be. Your melodies were very nice albeit soft, but considering that Breaks is bass and percussion driven like Dub and D&B; I won't be so hard on you. This is definitely worthy of being in many a submission on here.
Other: While the big file may put off those on slow connections; the fact that you were willing to do something new is very commendable.

[+]
-Original
-Catchy
-Nice drums, bass, and synth
-Good rhythm and tempo
-Very atmospheric

[-]
-The percussion nearly drowned out the melodies.

Overall: Here's another ten from me, and I might have to look into new Audio Software. (5/5)