Hmm ok something differant
Alright so this has a "UNIQUE" touch to it, something really good here and i like how you really goin and out of mixes and sounds, adding some sort of backround effects or maybe more backround effects, but i really like the mix you give this and glad its not all on one flow feel you really make it unique and differant with the mixyure so nice job indeed on that aspect of stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good lots of quality could use more of that backround effect you already gave it some good mixture maybe a tad more wouldnt hurt.