Really liked the wobbly synth rhythm. The tune gives that feeling of some awkward boss in a game telling you they can never die before you kill them.

The wobbling synth is really nice and gives a great front sound. The second synth I hear being deeper is good on the ears. The build up sound was also pretty nice. The drum rhythm sounds like a simple use of drums with the basic drum kit you can start with combined with a second snare.

Overall, nice little tune.

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hey its quite nice! i think ill use this for a flash movie im making, good job!

This needs some work. The big thing is instrument choice - your instruments are really bizarre. The main instrument (leads off the song) definitely shouldn't sound like it does - you probably want to make it sound more pluckish.

The other big problem is the note choice - a lot of the notes seem really out of place and don't really fit in with the key. Listen critically to your songs! Make sure everything sounds right.

Sorry to be such a debbie downer! Keep working at it. My favorite part of this song is the saw melody that is going at :35. Work on that idea a bit more, think about your instruments some more.

(I don't rate songs, I just write reviews. Rating is too contentious anyways.)