Nice sounds
These kind of tracks always have a good touch and feel to them, they are decent, and in some cases kind of differant but thats what i like about them, so what i have to say is that i was pleased with what you came up with, keep that kind of style up. Nice flowing andpleasent theme here it was nothing too crazy but it was a soothing tune, i think you could spice this up with some edge to it some build up to it and even more deeptunes to it, just a few things to think about in the progression of making this better. so keep up the decent work as this one. Now to end this, you have a decent piece there is some open discussion for some improvment just a tad here or there, but other then that this was actually notbad at all,
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So like i said there are some options for some improvments just here or there, and i have gone and suggested a few here and hope they can help and hope you have the time to improve on this, because it will be well worth the effort, regardless of what you do good stuff indeed. So this one seemed like it needed more of a build up, more of adeep sounds and overall more of an edge to it as i have mentioned.