Can't wait to hear the finished product. Definitely a solid WIP :3
Author Comments
A quick tune I started working on last night. My favorite DnB track so far that I've done, tell me what you think. (:
DetiousMusic responds:
It's actually finished, I just haven't had time to upload it/ /:
HI! Thanks for the review on my song, now I get to listen to your awesome musics!
I love this tune. The chords are definitely what popped out to me, they were so unusual! I don't know if thats your style or something but you should definitely do this a lot! n__n love these chords. Your percs cut through the mix well, and you seem to have mastered it (?) quite well also. haha but don't listen to what I'm saying on mixing and mastering because I really don't know what I'm talking about :D
Only reason for the four stars is the beginning was a bit choppy. I don't know, I just felt like it didn't move well too the dnb part. Anyways, great job!
DetiousMusic responds:
The song is finished now, I just haven't uploaded it. It's quite different but thanks! :D
It's not bad but it's way too short. I understand it's a work in progress but it's really not much of a submission at this point.
DetiousMusic responds:
Okay. I upload a short version so I can test it through my sub because It's in my car, so I put it on newgrounds. As I said for the guy below me, review the song not the layout of the song. Learn how to review.
Neither the drum nor the bass really starts until over halfway through the song. That's a definite weakness; of course, it could be fixed if the song were expanded to something like three or four minutes. The song does leave itself very open for another section.
DetiousMusic responds:
First off, it's not done. Second off, it's an intro and a build that doesn't even last that long. And third off, the section with nothing but a pad is the downbeat for the next portion of the song. Which brings me to my first point, it's not done. So next time you review a song make sure it's the actual song and not the layout.
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 1,165
- Downloads
- 66
- Votes
- 6
- Score
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4.00 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Aug 15, 2012
- 3:15 PM EDT
- Genre
- Drum N Bass
- File Info
- Song
- 1.2 MB
- 1 min 18 sec
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