not bad

this is pretty good for a first song
but in the begining you should have a lead, instead of just starting it with the melody that will be through the whole song..(start it with a different melody that goes for like 30-60s then start the main melody)
other than that, maybe add a couple more patterns, nd call it a finished song
you got talent, keep makin music
beat was good, timing nd all.

NaL3s

Nice!

Okay, so this isn't helpful coming from a nobody, but I loved that piece. So it's a techno song, and they are same-y-ish, but! This has the right tune to it. Can't get enough of it. Prepare to be downloaded, song!

.:Coded|Arms|Zero:.