The drum line sounds interesting.
You definitely got to work hard on the structure of this song, you should try to build and define each part of the song.
I have noticed that around 1:28 your main synth clips a bit, this happens because of the equalization that you have to work aswell.
You have some interesting characteristics in this song, i like the bass line and some of the glitchy effects that you created.
I think that if you work out the main "problems" that i pointed in your song you'll have something good in the end.
I started producing music very recently and one of the things that helped me a lot was to download a good music edition program. I'm using ableton live wich is great, i recommend it because it's very intuitive.
Then i started to consume, and by saying consume i mean i did an intense search, of all kinds of music tutorials around the internet.
Plus i've tried to learn everthing that i could about music production and music theory, this helps a lot. I've done all this using what the internet could give me, and believe it or not, you can find all this easilly and learn by yourself everything you need. Am i a good producer? No i'm not, but in 5 months i have learned a lot, and i'm having good reviews around here.
What i mean is that you have something here, you dont need to have lots of music experience, you just need to have the will and curiosity to know more then you know.
I sense in your song creativeness, i think you just need to get a bit more music information to turn out awesome around here.
I believe in you.
Pm me when you have a new song, i want to hear it.
Cheers.