Okaaayy...

I think you must have hit submit a second time because it was taking too long. Then it asked you to change the name right? You can just email tom at tom@newgrounds.com and he'll delete this. Or the other one. I'll copy paste my review just in case...

Thanks for the review! ^_^
This is a really cool song! Nothing to criticize. Don't change a thing. 10/10 and 5/5!
You show alot of promise as a musician, and I look forward to your future work! *adds to favorites list*

Peace,
dark otaku

It's Good

I like your melodies (go the pianoz!)
But you need to included some bass at the beginning of the song to build up to that cool part in the middle... Maybe you could extended that middle part by repeating with the piano melody on the top.
Overall it was very nice, but definitely need more bass and drums throughout.
BTW thanx for reviewing my song,
Check out my other songs!

G'bye
Smad.