It's ok...

The right word to say is to just keep experimenting. This rather sounds like someone who just started making music. That is, the beat. The beep sound is really kick ass. I would have gaven this a much higher grade if it wasn't so repetitive and you serieusly, SERIEUSLY need some work on the percussion. Just keep experimenting and believe me, a year or so ago i also made music like this. You are a flower not yet unpopped.