Aw man... you have no idea how bummed I was when I realized this song already had vocals. I'm loving the feel of it though. GREAT job with the intro. I was immediately pulled in. Also loved the break at 1:08 and outro. Would be 5 stars without the vocals. The quality of the voice and mixing is good, but I'm not crazy about the some of the verbiage and word placement.
Checking out your other music right now...
hopefully I can find something we can collaborate on?