Very cool

So here was something pretty cool, I like how this strats off not too deep but then slowly builds up and is progressuvly smooth as it goes through the whole piece, I would love some intense "BUILD-UP" but honestly this is a really nice sound you have going on here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More intense build ups.

~X~

Hello, again, Gunmaster. It's still, well, pretty good! Rhythm stood out to me this time, whereas last time I was wondering where the melody was XD Also, the ending stood out to me too. I like the sudden ending as opposed to the "classic fade-out," but that's just me. Btw, I realized that 2:13 wasn't just my computer glitching, it was part of the song...and I like that! It's interesting and unique. Besides what I simply didn't pay attention to, it almost felt to me like the same song as version 1.2. When I mentioned the simplicity of the song last time, I was suggesting that you add depth the song. I didn't really see more depth here. Maybe you could add a sub-bass line or something? Anyway, keep working on it. Still think you've got potential. :)