some diversity would be better

okay first problem: The beat goes nowhere you might wanna add snares and hi-hats
Second Problem: The synth is too loud and it sounds an awful lot like Ray Charles' "hit The road jack"
third problem: A lot of this is really off key, im getting the feeling that you just really put random things into the piano roll, a melody would be real nice

With some practice you can advance your skills with fruity loops.

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