I liked that....
...arp, twas a meanie. you should try to control the levels of the different channels a little better, though, it doesnt seem quite balanced to be honest. The beat, when it kicks in is disting quite a bit, wich felt a little annoying. What you should have on this song is a typical dnb snare+basedrum, do fatten it up. Also there lacks a decent subbass to pound things up to the next level. I think i hear somet sytnh in the back bassing up a little bit, but it really needs more.
The arp, however was really sweet! But compared to the rest of the song, it might be a little too dominant.
The song is really nicley built, but it really needs to be "happeneing" when an expectation is built, if you know what i mean.
Keep it up, this is a really cool song man!
/Rucklo