badly mastered, but am i on the right path?
Yeah, you're getting better.
You just have to keep working at it. Listen to any music you like, you'll pick up a thing or two there. If you have no idea of music theory/structure, it's kinda hard to make your own stuff. So yeah, keep working at it, and check out some of my techno mixes!
-SuperDrummer146
Haha dude, i do listen to everything. being broad minded makes it a right bastard to write anything.
Maybe i just have add, cos i cant concentrate for shit. who knows. cheers for the review tho, sure i'll check you out.
You're getting better.
This loop needs more volume on the drums and the bass line needs a bit more tuning. (use a different sample is what I mean by Tune)
Dude, not being funny but i've used about 12 synths just for the bassline. So i dont know whether to take some out or put more in, i've not actually used any samples for the bass. Only samples used are the drum kit.
Agreed on the drums, i need more power on the kick but i cant figure that out yet, more volume makes it clip, compression gives the wrong sound, maybe i need to reverb the drums n compress the kick separately? Thanks for the review dude, i'll check your work out.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
SpamWarrior 
