This song really makes my speakers rumble, I really love the distortion at certain parts, but still, got a bit ear raped at the start.

Alright, let's listen to this track and... ahhh! What's this?!

Mastering is quite terrible and I'm sorry to say it but it is. You really need to work on that point: improve your mastering, and that'll really upgrade the listening experience tons. This was probably the biggest issue with the track: the sound is just too overpowered and goes over the 0db mark everytime there is a kick and distorts the kick sound. An easy way to fix this is by adding a limiter over your master mixer track, however I suggest you don't, it makes it sound very amateurish. Master your tracks yourself, find tutorials online... anything helps, really!

Composition wise, seems fine. I'm not a complextro expert, but this definitely fits the house genre. Don't know what kind of house, but it surely is. Though, whenever I listen to house I tend to expect smooth songs. Don't know, it's just personal taste.

Everything else looks fine. Maybe the high pitched sweeps are a bit too high pitched.

Good work, you're getting there. Liking it, but keep practicing! As the proverb says, practice makes perfect! You can never have enough of it! :)

Vibin well while you've been gone I see, Good work man.

What else you got?