i know my rating goes almost to zero. thats bc im a more experienced 'producer' of some kind lol.
eventho i read the post on your front page,
i felt like i should check atleast 1 song out eventho your a 'beginner'.

if i may be honest, there's a major KEY problem in this track.
my ears detect atleast 2 melodies (the saw and the vocal sound), both out of KEY.
i also agree with FB, the song needs more variation and needs more drums as in; hihats, shaker, percussion, claps and what not to use.
the build ups to whatever you where going for arent strong enough either.
so basically. i shouldnt have spilled my thoughts on this song, yet i did.
i do hope you understand my point of view in some way, and im even going to make you a deal;
as i won't zero bomb your score bc of this.

Needs more variation also the build ups can be better. It's like the hole song the same melody althoug u tried to make it not so repetive but it still is to repetive. also I would have added a clap to give your drums and hihat's more power

~Forever Bound~

ps: plzz checkout my songs ;)

Its alright. Could of been more creative with the transitions and techniques. Its fairly generic