Oh yes .. the first 10 seconds you already had me.
Ingenious pad at the beginning.
Unfortunately, what followed was very confusing.
Unfortunately I could not do anything.
I'm sorry but for me it's not worth more than 3 stars.

People forget that the context of this project is in the description, it's an experiment, and as such one with a lot more entertaining values than other stuff I've listened to on NG haha, also, buttsecks

If the timing is used correctly as BGM/VGM, this could really make an epic scene even more epic. As WxNv stated, it does feel out of sync and disjointed, but, as I already mentioned, if used correctly, this has a lot of potential in complementing whatever it plays in the background for. So, you really should focus on presenting this as more BGM/VGM material and maybe even make a loopable version.

Way too much going on and it feels like it's out of sync most of the time. Like you've just put a lot of different sounds together and mashed it. Editing the transitions and removing all the unnecessary noises would make this so much better.

The single chord was nice, but I believe a more minor sounding chord would have suited the drum part better. The drums were really cool, but the opening could have gotten to into a more constant beat sooner. While it was almost overly simple, it was not hurt because of that.
Good job.