This is very funny and that guy's friend sounds like a very bad writer. This is very good and irregardless of whether you continue this specific story I'd like to hear more prose. Also, the imagery was very good. For all intensive purposes this was very good as such, but it obviously feels unfinished. In conclusion, this is very good, and I could care less about background music or sound affects. Supposably you have more written and I'd like to hear it.
Author Comments
Hey,
This is my first time uploading spoken word prose. This is the opening of a short story i might get round to writing. I've written more than i've recorded here but i'm never very good at finishing these things.
Words:
http://www.newgrounds.com /dump/item/fb0560bcb2e27a 1978148202b4579938
(sorry for the external link, they won't fit in the description box)
Thanks
PIED3 responds:
Many thanks Zump! I'm still working on this so expect more sometime soon.
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 887
- Downloads
- 36
- Score
- Waiting for 4 more votes
- Uploaded
- Dec 30, 2012
- 5:00 PM EST
- Genre
- Spoken Word
- File Info
- Voice
- 2.9 MB
- 3 min 9 sec
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Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
