Ok, so I'm going to review this as I hear it.

I like the atmosphere... ok so I'm at 20 seconds in and that pluck seems too loud especially when compared to the next placment of it. Around 30 seconds in the progression seems to be a bit dissonant. ok so I just hit 1:00 neet break down but the songs kind of lacking an energy and movement I would love. Ok I'm at 2:00 and you just dropped the arp, you have me in suspended space, where are you going to take me? 2:30 I love this but you should have had like a noise sweep or a snare role to really bring the suspense, that way the impact of the next part would have been much greater. The lead around 3:15 seems really stale, maybe a chorus and some more reverb would help. Actually this whole song feels rather dry. I think you need to do some eq tweaks because sounds tend to clash. Are you removing the frequencies you don't need on everything? That last hit would have been real fresh with some panning and more reverb. All in all I give it a 8/10. Keep up the great work.