The music is good and the lyrics inspired...
But! This sounds like it was recorded in the distance (or maybe with a microphone inside a cardboard box)... Now, don't take this as me being harsh. I'm just saying you should invest in a better quality microphone, or in post-recording voice brush-ups...
Other than that you got some really great potential here!
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Lyrics:
Already know what next should be.
Sobriety is clarity.
So hire them and fire me.
Yeah buy me, condemn me and hopefully wreck me.
What can I say?
This is a word from 'generation what now?'
We're all here we just don't know how.
Do you ever feel like you wish you were dead?
Broken record in my head.
What can I say?
Already know what everyone buys.
With their he said she said lies.
Pulling wings and still time flies.
Yeah, buy me, condemn me and hopefully sell me.
What can I say?
(Chorus Again)
What can I say?
My shelter. My home. I walk to. Alone.
Walk to. Walk to. I want to. Alone.
Do you ever feel like the comfort in waiting is due to the fact that no one is listening?
What can I say?
(Chorus again)
What can I say?
My shelter is gone. I walk on alone.
I want to. Walk to. Walk to. Alone.
Do you ever feel like the comfort in waiting is due to the fact that no one is listening?
Stereocrisis responds:
Thanks man, and you're absolutely right. I record with a handheld camera. I appreciate the compliments. Thank you.
A little bit of clean up would be of huge benefit to this track, but even beneath that it sounds really great.
Stereocrisis responds:
I agree with both statements.
You should get this dope shit recorded in better quality. Not to good though. I hate the to clean sounding grunge some people throw around. So yeah, polish this gem til it shines! But not till it bleeds.
Stereocrisis responds:
You are right about it not being all that grungy. I just thought the lyrics sounded jaded. I should put this track under general rock. Check out my other stuff if you like. Thank you for your comment!
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