Lamazar! Good rap, nice bg music! Keep at it man! Can't stop at one. Sounded great jus need a lil more punch in the vocals. Almost monotone, but everyone does that on their first try. I still have a hard time putting emphasis in words which is why I've never released vocals lol. But you got it for sure. Cook up some more lyrics, I wanna hear more! Later man!

It's alright, but I just didn't like how there was just no emotion in your voice. Other than that, you should spend a long time writing our lyrics and devote your time to it, because in the end, you'll get results that you and everyone will love. Mabelma also makes an excellent point. Story raps are just... better, like they actually have a meaning, and aren't just random words and swears thrown together :P. Anyways, it was alright, and you should keep doing rapping, if you really love doing it!

For a freestyle it's pretty nice. I suggest you stay clear of the egotistical rapping, try and tell a story with your rhymes rather than just saying, "I'm great, I'm great, I'm great" It makes for better songs in my opinion. Apart from that there's not much else to say, seeing as it's only a freestyle I can't actually judge your rhyming but keep going mate, and keep posting for sure, don't stop.