This track is basically perfect and I can see it also meaning a surge of power. My only regret is that the strong part near the end doesn't last nearly long enough. It's hard to find a good track that does even that, become more powerful as t builds up.

Well I'd like to state you've composed some nice, "made up sounds." Soft to the ear, flows well, but in my opinion the music is too slow and when you reach the climax it's lacking. Kind of like a monotonous, "Woo." Versus an exciting, "WOOOOOYEAH!"

What I'm saying is you've got the composure down and I believe it needs to be brought up a notch.