I too like the chords you use here. They're really creative and certainly portrays the description. It's quite dynamic too. The texture is too thick however to be considered proper 8-bit to me although I think it could work in an old point-and-click adventure game. It does sound like it's been wrote/played on a piano and then changed to a square wave and with note this thick it presents some phase issues and detracts from the harmony. Good, but could work better with a different timbre.