Its pretty chill, like an afterhours thing. If you wanted to give it a little more energy, a stronger kick would do the trick. Reminds me of Deep house a bit. It feels like it should be building up to something, I'd say. More melodies to make the loop less repetitive and nice and longer would be great.

Not bad all things said.

Pretty stellar loop. It's hard to pick out any faults in a thirty second loop. One thing that i can say is that the mix was a big improvement over your other song 'Space Theme' Maybe it lacked some energy to be danceish (that's a word now) Good job