Alright, lets press play and see what happens.
Oooh, that glass is nice. If this was prepared as a loop I think it would have worked a lot better. Honestly all you really need is the first 12 seconds of this track. I really enjoy the trumpet synth, its nice and warm.
Things to improve on~
I would brighten up the bells, a nice little bump on the eq at 8khtz and a slight high shelf at 12khtz. I would reduce the reverb on the kick because its kind of adding a layer of mud on the track. I would also bring up the drum sounds because I feel like there just too far behind everything else. Some compression on the snare could be nice too.
Honestly because this song is so short I cant really say much on it. Next time your working with so little source material try to expand on the song. You can do this by drifting away from the main melody and then coming back to the main theme as a chorus. I hope this helps you in your adventures with music.
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