Definite potential

It has potential, as do you, its nice, but needs work, a 4 at most.

good

It's pretty good. And different... :D

i lix0r

this has so much potential.

im not the best, but here's some hint's:
-use the velocity on mainly claps, hats, and snares, and sometimes on bild ups on synths.
-use the sytrus premades for synths, and dont mix it up randomly, this time you got lucky and made it sound very good.
-the claps is good, but go for traditional techno beat,

CLAP _ _ _ _ + _ _ _ _ _ _ _ + _ _ _
KICK + _ _ _ + _ _ _ + _ _ _ + _ _ _
HAT _ _ + _ _ _ + _ _ _ + _ _ _ + _

Thats traditional for yaa!

Also:
-it is okay to take piano rolls from previous projects for your own, just tweak it a little.
-use the fruity slicer for the drumloops, like aspirin as an easy one, and make the main drum line out of that.
-use fruit kick only at the right time
-NO RANDOM SONGS!!!

thats all!

- Spik'd to perfection -

Good, but...

You are in need of some non-FL samples. Talk to me on AIM at supergnome29 if you want. Be sure to check my shit too man.

Good luck!

Your day will come

Crazy potential DUde get your self some new VSTs
and as cool as your beats they kinda drove the crap out of me. use bigger heavier noises and you'll be condsidered a bigger player