Im not really "happy" with this so i think i may fix it later so we are gonna call this Version 1.0 since i plan on maybe getting the song to sound better
Very nice work
The voices in there make it something different I really love all the variation you have added within this whole piece love all them unique sounds especially towards the end so nice job indeed I do hope you make more like this down the road anyways nice work.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
make more
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It's really moody and interesting. I'm not sure I like the vocals, though. At times, it sounded a little too penetrating to fit with the smooth-sounding theme, like at :33. I also thought the parts didn't harmonize very well sometimes, and it sounds way too busy around 1:07. There are a lot of more interesting ways of ending a piece than a fade-out, btw. I still like the instruments, though, and I think it has potential. It just has two contrasting moods right now which don't fit well together- smooth and flowing, and rough and penetrating. You should keep working on it. It's worth it. ;)
ty for the review, i will definitely will take all that into account for when im fixing this song!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Darkceo 
