It's good...

It's good for a while but it is too much repetitive. I understand that it is how hip hop is and that is why i don't really like the genre.

Diversity is the key, having a bassline that differs from the main melody would be a great touch.

I see you are using many instruments and that is a good point. The beat ranges in the average/good. All that really needs working on in this piece is the repetitiveness.

Keep it up though man, you are getting better.

Shit Yaa

Dude that was awsome. keep up the good work and stuff.