I know this is old now but I downloaded and still have the song since it was shortly published on here. Since then I have many many times went through my list of songs and deleted even more (by the hundreds) then what I have added. Because I still have this song, and because I am taking the time to do a review means you should take my advice. It is good but mostly because of the intro. If you have kept the whole song with the same rhythem and beat and sound as the intro to this song it would be a hit. You should remake it that way because I don't know how to. Good work.

A slow rise i was near pausing and giving 0 but i did not, and i think it worth the wait more less.

This is pretty cool, I like it c: