Don't get discouraged. This track was an improvement from your last one, though you still need to EQ your wobbles, or change them entirely. The underlying thumping bass... or kick... whatever it was, that was pretty cool. It was reminiscent of the opening bass in Bonfire by Knife Party. In between your bass riffs, you seem to lack everything other than the drums. Try to throw in a variety of basses and a combination of melody and leads. You are on the right path, keep going!

You are doing good and going on the right path but that is just a little too rough and is sort of blunt in sound it is like it if F***king your ears with thunder, that is how BAD it is even though that may be your intention