FUCK all i need now is cocaine.
anyway, nice songs you got up, really hope you finish, just downloaded this song dude.
if you got the time i could use an opinion on my last two songs on my page!!

This is really sick. I know it isn't polished but it still sounds pretty cool. I'll go through each section.

00:00 - 00:27:
Really nice deep bass. I like that hissing air sound, fits very nicely. I feel like you could have done something very nice with this. The only thing I dislike is that it doesn't have variety, but having the entire thing be 27 seconds will do that. Again, I know this is 'slapped together' but even your slapped together sounds sick. I really feel like you could have added some stuff to this one and made a really great song.

00:28 - 01:22:
This one really started great, but I was less impressed with the middle section. It started really nice, headbanger for sure. Nice bass, nice sounds, nice use of silence. However, at 00:55, when you had '4 to the floor' bass hits I think it took away from the song. To me, it might have sounded better if you kept that 2-step tempo that makes trap really enjoyable for me. The section itself sounds good, as in use of instruments, etc. but I don't think it fits as well. Great transition to the next section of the song, though. Over-all, I'd say this started as really awesome, but that middle part sounded out of place. Good, but out of place.

01:22 - 02:10:
Beginning sounded nice, I like the sounds in the background. However, I feel like something was missing at 01:47. The beginning felt like it was building up to something a little bigger. It sounded good, but I think you could have added a bit more. Felt a bit anti-climactic. However, this section was probably my favourite. I really liked that contrast between the soft sounding strings and flute? in the background and the rough sounding tone blasting away in the foreground. I guess it read to me like the contrast between the beauty of fire and the destructiveness and danger of fire (reading too much into it?). Over-all, sounds great.

02:10 - 03:06:
Okay, I loved the bass in this song. The variety in the bass added a lot for me. I don't know, maybe it's me, but it sounded really great. Another thing I liked was the variety in those clapping sounds. Like, you started each bar with a really strong clap (like at 02:26 or so) and then changed to lighter. The variety also added a lot. But then, I heard at the end that sound, I'm not sure what exactly it is or is called, but that should have been in the song more often. It sounds too cool to be at the end only. Over-all, this particular section sounds very cool, and I don't have anything big to complain about. I hope you finish it!

Everything you did here sounds good, but rough and unpolished, which is exactly what you knew was true. I think all of these would sound so awesome if they were finished/put into full songs, especially that first one and the last one. 3.5/5. I hope you continue on the path of trap/hip-hop. but if not, I look forward to whatever genre you next delve into.

~Pixelbey

damn sonn! 5/5 off top! keep it up!