Industrial?
Thats a hell of a change of pace! :)
The plink synth is nice and all, but you have this... 'sound' in the backround that is ruining my mood :( I lost my hard on.
Your gonna pay for that.
It'd be nice if those sounds were melodic or something. Just so they could actually help to the structure of the song, instead of just filling up backround noise.
The drum percs were nice, and when the drums and dirty synth broke in, do you know what I thought to myself?
'OMGTHIS IZ 2 LOWD!1WWLKDWA12~!!!!@!@@!!'
My proceeded to explode, for it could be much more controlled.
Good work, but not really my taste, i prefer more of a controlled, slower, and less ambient form of industrial.
I'm not gonna bother going through the scores this time. You can decifer them yourself :)
-zenon-