Very strange

Hmm... in theory, this is a nice style. Unfortunately, when you have ambient strings playing a half step off from everything else, it just sounds kinda... wrong. Also, I wonder - did you use a drum loop? It just seems kinda out of place. I don't know...

I really like those strings

I like the strings there well done they sound extreemly dreamy. those strings are a great harmony. Your getting there man. But I have to say youve mastered your beats.