Not bad
Sounds like it would be rather high caliber, professional sounding hard trance if it were high quality. It's not my cup of tea, but I'm not going to downrate you because of that, rather I'll look at the more technical aspect, and it sounds( I guess ) like it has been mastered and equalized through and through. I picture this EASILY in a Blade movie. Or, you know, a club full of vampires. :)
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