This is so badass!! I love the vocal work, and not gonna lie the intrologue was bossmode!!!
Ima need you to introduce all of my songs lmao!
I think it's about time I get off my ass and start submitting music again.
This piece is UNFINISHED, but it is a little more current. I've been experimenting with adding vocals into some of my pieces, and sometimes it turns out listenable. The hardest part is trying to find time to record the VoX...
The song was something I was working on for a while before I added vox to it, probably a month or so. But eventually I came up with the inspiration to finish most of the song. It just needs a few more vocal takes and (fucking of course) a solo. Or maybe a breakdown. Have you noticed that breakdowns are the new guitar solos? Weird, right?
Anyway, here's some lyrics:
I wrote this stupid song just for you
Hopefully it will give you a broader view
(Sing in low voice following rhy guitars)
Rending and tearing my soul in-to two
How could I ever have been such fool
Anger, disaster and clandestine rage
We are the birds, life is our cage
(This line is missing so just pretend I wrote something)
Damaged but hopeful you'll be on your way
What we could have been, what we could have made, What we could have done
Never to know what would we have become
You.
And.
I.
Two words that
Mean
More.
Than Life
Never to
Take
What's
Ours
Never to
Know
What
Is.
Destiny's End.
It was all a mirage; just a fantasy facade
Drink the sand and pray to god that
The broken pieces of my dreams
Ignite my hate and produce the screams
The hourglass is empty, time is up
This is the end and I give no fucks
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
You loved me
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
I loved you
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
Fantasy
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
This is how it ends
Destiny.
(This song is in 3/4 if you're confused <3)
This is so badass!! I love the vocal work, and not gonna lie the intrologue was bossmode!!!
Ima need you to introduce all of my songs lmao!
<3 I totally will. Just give me lines, I smoke cigarettes. I'll be your bossmode commentator.
I LOVE YOU ROB.
Definitely into these lyrics more, and i really got into the second half :D Instrumentals are still totally solid. Looking forward to the finished version!
Also, the line 'I realize that there's nothing to say' is barely audible. Don't know if you knew, but yeah, just wanted to point that out ^^ Unless it's intentional, then whatever I guess :P
Haha yeah, I kinda fucked up on the clean part there, so I just deleted it all and I have to re-record it. Which is fine with me, because none of the beginning part is very good. I wasn't quite warmed up in the vocal cord area, so I sound like a failure for the first 2 verses of the song.
Aaaand it ended now with a loop, and it never ends!
Isn't that the best way to make things work?
Just like Dark, I saw this posted on FB! Was like, DROP EVERYTHING THAT YOU ARE DOING, Burn 7 has something to say O.O! And I can't wait for the full version!!! Hope all is well, the past two songs showin some rage, I like rage :D just hope it all is good behind the track~ xD
Muhahah! Facebook is actually good for something!
I'll have to remember to actually use it. And not in that annoying way where I just post a bunch of random "LOL LOOK I FOUND THIS" photos. In actual, meaningful ways.
Ya know, like more music kinds of ways.
Decided to log in to my Facebook. See this in my feed. Fanboy like no other immediately. This was freaking great for a WiP. Loving it so far and can't wait to hear the final version since it sounds so great already. Keep it up dude.
-Darkwinged-
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.