Well Done
Its nicly put together and well thought out. but there's something missing. When the music starts out have more stuff than what was going on. Like somthing to catch the person. So they dont go (Oh ok thats kinda cool) but he dosent have time to listen to the hole thing. He's thinking oh I dont have the time to listen to it. But you have that great middle part going on but people wont get to it. Sure some people will listen to the hole thing but not everybody.
But anyways you song rocks. Keep at it.